seems like the web distributions werent matching with the pc upload, but the web one should work now ! thanks for pointing that out because I think most people just downloaded which is why it stayed unmatched
Okay, the storyline is AMAZING and I had a lot of fun playing, but can we just talk for a second about how good the art is? Like, this is THE BEST art and character design for a visual novel I have ever seen. Keep on drawing, you are great at it and I love your stuff! :3
Very creative game, with interesting characters. It actually has a decent amount of world-building. Your art style is lovely. I wish the game would be a bit longer. Some criticism I have is that parts of the dialogue seem unnatural considering that characters have known each other for 3 years and some parts of the protagonist's thoughts in the intro I would consider unnecessary as they are also repeated later in the conversation with Sucre. Also adding at least one additional music track could help too, because it feels repetitive even in a short game. Overall I loved the game and managed to get the "good ending" on the first try.
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I recently discovered your games. I tried this first game, and it's pretty good!
Personally, I'm viewing Ending 4 as canon. I know it's a bad ending, but I view it to have the best ending world state of the bunch.
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did you download it? i had the same problem on newgrounds and fixed it there but i guess i forgot to fix it here too :> but i fixed it now !!
I never tried downloading games (on here)
seems like the web distributions werent matching with the pc upload, but the web one should work now ! thanks for pointing that out because I think most people just downloaded which is why it stayed unmatched
i got all the ending and all i really have too say is wow. this game really is good for a beginner, so i'd say keep going!
Very creative game, with interesting characters. It actually has a decent amount of world-building. Your art style is lovely. I wish the game would be a bit longer. Some criticism I have is that parts of the dialogue seem unnatural considering that characters have known each other for 3 years and some parts of the protagonist's thoughts in the intro I would consider unnecessary as they are also repeated later in the conversation with Sucre. Also adding at least one additional music track could help too, because it feels repetitive even in a short game. Overall I loved the game and managed to get the "good ending" on the first try.